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Performance Critique: June 21a

8pm Show

httpv://youtu.be/EnIpXn0HiWQ

2m00s I could throw in a line of “that’s easy if you don’t try” or something

9m28s Good improvising

9m45s Good job acknowledging the drink spill and going on about it

Overall: Eh. Had light laughs throughout, but they should be stronger.

Performance Critique: June 18

The 7pm show

httpv://youtu.be/ZRlyof7yK1s

2m18s Say it stronger “you’re gonna wanna see where I’m going first”

3m00s Emphasize drove

5m18s On an “ooh” I can say “if you think that’s bad, check out my new website…”

Overall: Solid but nothing special.

Performance Critique: June 16

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/b3odJBp1hrY

4m28s Cut the lonely line

4m45s Don’t mention it’s a dick joke

5m13s There’s some sort of comment to be said about women who laugh at that, figure it out

6m02s Eyes need to be more open

9m35s That’s what happens when the joke up to now is missing

10m42s At least I ended on two okay laughs

Overall: Weak set

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