Opening a 2pm graduation show
httpv://youtu.be/3Pt_RfN_DcI
0m33s Connecticut character needs more body language
1m33s Used “good” way too often in the past few sentences
Overall: Strong short set, could’ve ended on a stronger line though
Opening a 2pm graduation show
httpv://youtu.be/3Pt_RfN_DcI
0m33s Connecticut character needs more body language
1m33s Used “good” way too often in the past few sentences
Overall: Strong short set, could’ve ended on a stronger line though
Opening the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/Rvt9wBvUg0Q
6m29s Try adding “guys, if the girl you’re with laughs at that, get a pre-nup”
9m42s Emphasize “you’ll” more
10m43s Always nice to hear an “aww” when I say I gotta go
Overall: Decent for going first, but not great.
10pm Check Spot
httpv://youtu.be/i71RpoKfQyY
1m08s Good in the moment acknowledgement of one laugh
5m04s Good job being in the room and playing off of what happened
Overall: Good for a check spot
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/DZwowk7vwFY
0m30s Good job starting with stuff that’s in the moment
2m35s Try air quotes around “nightmare”
6m33s Pick one person to ask, preferably someone I last talked to
Overall: Good set, could’ve finished stronger though.
Late night at a music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/Gvh4dGqG2v8
4m18s Good delivery on the “forever, gotcha”
Overall: Good for doing new material after midnight