An 8pm show for a small crowd
httpv://youtu.be/58tR5BXISIU
2m20s Cut the lonely line
2m38s No need to address that it’s a dick joke
3m18s If the shoes gets a good laugh, I can do the act out without labeling it from here on out
3m57s No need for history majors line
4m58s Decent improvised line to keep around about “people laugh at different speeds”
Overall: Ok set, tighten some of the newer jokes
7pm Show
httpv://youtu.be/uWIUNzd62j8
0m18s If they’re not that loud might be good to ignore things up front
1m48s Say “pray” instead of “wait”
3m26s Repeat “wet dream” if turning to someone about it
Overall: Okay, some big laughs but too many light laughs/misses.
The 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/-K_VkKDJ2l4
2m40s Might want to remember the “that’s sad and true” line
4m42s Good job acknowledging what’s going on
5m34s Deliver the “numbers are amazing this month” as a punch line as it seems to be getting laughs in spite of my current delivery
Overall: Solid set and good job acknowledging little moments as they happened.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/KUfN92QL1n8
2m52s Great improvised line to 15 year old kid
4m23s Emphasize “full time” a little more
Overall: Solid set, especially for checks. Nice that the new Boris/Ben bit worked the first time I tried it.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/LlNYdDiHl70
3m13s Find a smoother way into this joke
15m38s Might wanna cut the everyone’s dead part of the bit
17m02s Hit “I never realized” harder
Overall: Actual set was mediocre but decent job trying to interact with the crowd between bits.
