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Performance Critique: May 3

A Monday bar show, with sparse audience

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_N–qXavUk

1m53s They’re not fully listening by this point, I should talk to them a little bit

7m27s If I’m gonna ask about it, then I need to make a Catholic joke right after that

8m34s More emphasis on “without”

9m22s No need to explain the Wikipedia part, especially after a laugh

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XtMGN6WRjTs

0m28s Say “and here’s a picture of me taking a picture of…”

1m36s Pick which word to emphasize more consistently

2m00s Don’t do the fast stuff in the middle of the joke, only do it at the end

2m38s End this stronger

3m18s I should’ve noticed the crowd liked the dirtier jokes earlier in the set

4m01s Go back to “this week” instead of “since Tuesday”

Overall: I did some old stuff and some new stuff, it wasn’t great, but it wasn’t terrible either, especially given the crowd size. The sand joke needs some work.

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