My bar show, about six people listening
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5SGFCijXXuE
1m59s I could’ve addressed them sooner
6m12s Ask them about their photos since they volunteered “you wanna see ours”
7m37s The first two times I say “this is a photo of the sand” should be without emphasis on a specific word
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqZCX36R5CA
1m32s Kill this part of the joke
1m41s Add “a vacation from gainful employment”
Overall: I powered through my material in a loud room, got some laughs and was able to engage most of the audience into listening to at least part of my act. Aka, this could’ve been worse.
