This is a bar show in Staten Island. There was a 10 person audience
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dvYTwpJTvaw
0m23s I made a joke based on a host’s joke
1m42s Weird that 4 punch lines in a row missed after the “cancel relationship” got a big laugh, but good job pausing just the same
4m21s His parents were in the audience, so I acknowledged it
5m01s This is a good save line I’ve recently started using
5m44s Fun little rant
5m56s It’s okay to say that because he’s my friend
6m33s Awesome how rewinding time actually worked
7m33s Part of that joke is that we don’t get paid
8m05s No need to say “websites” and “online”, that’s redundant
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bUadSZ4_NhQ
1m32s I’ve brought this joke back but with a more surprising setup, and it seems to work better
3m12s This could be clearer
3m18s The sentence “while she’s taking the pill” should go before “don’t write this joke”
4m52s These fifteen minutes really did go by quickly
5m30s I don’t recommend playing “request a joke line” to close your set
6m54s High quality
6m58s The show was called “The Rodney Kings of Comedy”
Overall: This was the first time I tried to consciously not smile while delivering my jokes. I felt it worked and I was enjoying trying not to laugh. I couldn’t help laughing sometimes, but I’m really working on not doing a big smile after every joke. Considering there were only ten people in the audience, the show went pretty well.
