The Sunday Writer’s Mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N5Ekt7IrHXk
0m10s The previous comic made a racquetball joke, I tried to play off of it
0m29s I don’t usually do the jdate joke at open mics, but I’m trying to sprinkle some additional online dating one liners throughout the set
0m50s Kinda mean but nice
1m30s Try to end the joke with “see what you did there, you just shat on my idea of “it’s easy to shit””
3m05s This needs to be a lot shorter
3m15s The guy who commented is in his 50s and a big pothead
4m04s That joke isn’t a keeper
Overall: Decent for some new ideas. The “it’s easy to shit on things” joke has lots of potential, it just needs to be tightened. The traffic joke is mean but could definitely work. I need to try it some more. I should do online dating jokes in groups of two, not separate it even more and sprinkle a one liner between the rest of my jokes.
