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Performance Critique: January 22c

The Friday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zb50sXxUj8o

1m08s Get rid of “that’s like”

4m30s Good usage of pausing

5m01s Too wordy “online restaurant review websites”, rephrase it

5m58s Good job milking the look

6m25s I’ve been doing this joke for almost two years and nobody has ever said “bed” before

6m44s I put my hand out a second early

7m49s I like the improvised line of “and a clown suit”

9m18s Awesome phrase “the molester touch”

Overall: The set was pretty solid throughout but my first two minutes were stronger than the last eight. I need to maintain the level of laughs I had at the beginning throughout the whole set.

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