Another open mic I decided to do before getting to a real show
1m23s There was no need to call this out right here, the jdate joke got laughs
3m08s One chuckle at this open mic = roomful of laughter at a real show
3m38s No need to say “website” and “online” – that’s redundant
4m05s Get rid of the high maintenance line
4m24s Look more shocked and look more at the audience
Overall: If this wasn’t an open mic, I’d say I completely bombed. However, I don’t believe you can bomb at an open mic where there’s no real people, just other comics. If there’s non comedy people watching the open mic then you can most certainly bomb. The bright side is I didn’t speed up my delivery or get nervous about the silence.