A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PfRQ84cxOPk
0m16s No need for that start, I’m the only one who’d find that funny
1m22s Try “Barrack Obama” instead of “The New York Times”
2m07s Repeat his “okay” before “that could be kinda fun”
3m16s Instead of “always stay loyal to us” it should be “ONLY stay loyal”
3m45s Deliver this line seductively
3m52s This line doesn’t make sense here
5m45s Cut this whole girl at party story
7m05s Instead of “everything is great after that” I can say “it’s gonna be a fantastic year”
8m11s Smile a little while doing the poem
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oz0_43ZX4dw
0m38s Only sing the first line of the song, no need for the parody
0m55s Do the guard pole motion multiple times
Overall: I’m reworking some older jokes, and they still need work.