The 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HyDfYv12VBs
2m57s Good pause there, that laugh wasn’t there two weeks ago
3m30s Say “cmon” before “right” when the audience isn’t fully with me on that
4m34s Pause after “DVD”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x0oUNgVD2AA
1m07s A little more emphasis on “all”
2m53s Good delivery on the line
4m57s Great job setting up the crowd on a groan to instantly bring them back
5m40s The million point bonus joke has yet to work on a crowd
Overall: Great set. I got 4 or 5 applause breaks and strong laughs throughout (except for one joke that missed).
