Doing a set at my bar show in Queens for a “crowd” of four
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sXx977r-SW4
2m13s My tone of voice has been slightly miserable the whole time, a slight smile or better tone could help
3m28s The biggest laugh was when I stopped doing material and just talked and smiled a little
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7h1pIDBf9sg
3m02s These kind of shows are a good place to practice my bombing material
3m57s I shouldn’t do two dark jokes in a row
5m35s Keep holding the photo with my hand
Overall: The only time I got laughs was when I went off script and addressed the crowd or the situation in the room. My energy and enthusiasm was low and it showed in the lack of laughs. I need to find the line between deadpanning but still being excited to be there.
