An open mic with five or six other comics, doing multiple short sets
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pMTy7KntZTk
0m17s Change “it’s not true” to “that’s not fully accurate”
0m27s Cut the insurance and dent line
1m18s Get rid of the three girl examples
3m27s Kill this joke
4m02s Slow down
5m05s Say “Costco” after “people are suffering”
Overall: I had about as much fun as one can have at an open mic, and even watching this I can see where some material needs to be tightened.
