This is the same night as the last critique but the 10:30 show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ar3RGAO7PA8
0m17s I need to get up there and smile first, then open my mouth, not just get up there and open my mouth
1m25s Not enough emphasis on “HUGE TUBES”
1m42s It should be “when she has no other options” not when “you have no other options”
2m33s It’s always interesting when a quick comment back at the audience gets such a big reaction
3m44s I should’ve waited a few seconds longer to get all the laughs
4m55s I love how there’s one girl who keeps “awwwing” at everything
6m07 I wanted to end here but it didn’t get the laugh I was expecting
6m16s That didn’t help to close the set any stronger
Overall: I started out pretty strong but the last few jokes didn’t go as well as I would’ve liked