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Performance Critique: April 5

This is the feedback mic I go to on Sundays

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Z6lyYG1nxI

0m21s This isn’t a joke I plan on ever using I was riffing off of other people 

2m17s No reason to explain the joke if people laugh 

2m59s I really do need short “I get it” statement for the Halloween outfit 

4m05s Not sure if I need the the follow up of the “sexual to do list” for this joke. It might work better ending it after saying I did the clown make up thing 

4m41s This drinking and bank fund joke should be put to rest 

Overall: The rock paper scissor joke is working decently, the Halloween outfit and online date needs fixing and the drinking joke needs to go

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