I took another improv class and this is my first class show, I’m only gonna critique my parts. The format of this show was, walk around and dump three thoughts, do a monologue, repeat the previous two steps twice, then do two person scenes with the same person for three scenes
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ynFGdSOQZ4
2m49s Be more specific and say what we should do, instead of “something”
3m19s Good line and good job keeping a straight face
3m49s We could’ve had more action taking place or at least started a bigger plan
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bsaf2ia1Cp0
1m16s I screwed up the last name of the other characters, good fix by my partner
2m32 Good job acknowledging the bad object work
4m54s I should’ve come in as the female masseuse
6m20s I still could’ve come in as the female masseuse
7m10s Good call back
7m28s I should’ve focused on why he kept making tacos, said that he owns the store or something
8m23s I could’ve said something like, “Now that I’ve made out with the sixth girl, I don’t need the “smart” title to get action anymore”
9m16s I should’ve remembered saying the lessons thing and gotten into a future scene with the Gambilini’s
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sjkFwz_4M_k
2m52s Both me and my scene partner are up on chairs filming, you can only see him
3m36s The show was supposed to end, but didn’t, so we came out for another scene and ended it on a laugh
Overall: Decent improv but I could’ve assisted in other scenes more and my scenes could’ve gotten to the funny quicker
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