Category: Comedy

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IYu6CaHbh6A

3m43s Give a smirk after “war profiteering”

Overall: I got some laughs but I wasn’t having fun and I didn’t really talk to them or find little moments in which to improvise.

An open mic with 6-8 real audience members there

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=En1cBiexrwQ

2m12s Good job being in the moment and earning a lot of extra laughs

6m45s Keep the side comment

Overall: Very solid set. The rewritten mom jokes at the end could use a little tightening.

A late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EHgQOqgncxQ

4m32s Decent improvisation

9m38s Good improvised rant

10m49s Reword to “just picture this set”

14m45s She makes a point because the gate shouldn’t go below 90 degrees

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOM4M7mWWj4

2m18s Having someone do the the joke with me was fun

7m35s Don’t say “business” twice in the same sentence

8m22s Change “empathy” to “compassion”

Overall: I had fun rolling with all the interruptions and such.

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLZkoQ7lrlM

0m19s The comedy police would ask “have you been doing punch lines today?”

1m19s Cut the labor markets line

2m27s Reword to “all you do is funny business”

4m10s Cut the politician part

Overall: Working out rewritten jokes.

Going last at a music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrRHz_rV1OE

0m45s After “that only took like ten seconds” say, “now we can cuddle”

3m29s Sound a little more excited about the impression

5m42s Do a smoother setup for this joke

6m11s Do walk to the back of the runway like a model would do

8m46s Get a better chart to end the joke on

10m05s Commit harder to the dance

Overall: Eh. The corporate girl joke worked well, everything else had a weak response.