A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DC0uO0HjVpQ
2m19s Interesting how that’s the biggest laugh of the joke
2m52s Say “you’re right” at the start of the sentence, not the end
8m00s Nice improvised line
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z17va6KYcq8
0m39s “This” meaning there only being six people there
1m53s Stay on the ground until the laughs stop
5m50s Cut the “airhole” line or revise it
6m55s Good job slowly selling the impression and then bailing
7m32s Decent idea of a boxing coach as a joke
Overall: It was good for what it was and I had fun.