Performance Critique: December 23b

A music and comedy mic


2m19s Interesting how that’s the biggest laugh of the joke

2m52s Say “you’re right” at the start of the sentence, not the end

8m00s Nice improvised line

Part 2


0m39s “This” meaning there only being six people there

1m53s Stay on the ground until the laughs stop

5m50s Cut the “airhole” line or revise it

6m55s Good job slowly selling the impression and then bailing

7m32s Decent idea of a boxing coach as a joke

Overall: It was good for what it was and I had fun.

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