Category: Comedy

A late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Olnpy0bNK4o

2m04s Cut the dog eating line

3m58s Weak acting like I’m thinking before saying the “I guess” line

5m12s Reorder the words of these two lines

5m57s It should be “kids” not “children” the second time

6m52s Finish the sentence

7m04s Say “good thing I brought mine” a little more playfully

9m18s Try “I’m also a good person” instead of “and I’m…”

10m01s Finish the sentence even if improvising

10m47s Try “must’ve felt” instead of “felt”

13m02s Say “lucky lady” instead of “lucky audience member”

Overall: A little up and down but good set.

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w1TiLJNa4Uo

1m52s Cut the dog eating line

5m03s This needs a word other than “nunchucks”

Overall: Average to weak response for a mic

Going last on a music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=geceBcttg4M

1m12s Turn my head to one direction or another on the “romantic” line

2m18s Cut the dog eating lines

4m22s Put the emphasis on “mine”

6m30s Add “I guess” before “I should’ve warned”

9m08s It should be “women’s” not “women”

Overall: It took a couple minutes to get the crowd with me, but then it went pretty well.

A bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E_Tgn-0WoMo

3m22s Pick a word and go with it

4m33s Too much pause between the previous part of the joke and this, don’t bother with the second part if there’s a little crowd work between

Overall: Some laughs but a generally weak set.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oajJEvfoZnQ

1m26s Try “he can’t help you”

1m48s Instead of “that’s why I’m” say “good thing I’m”

3m07s If I’m gonna laugh it should be for longer and harder and then end more abruptly

4m43s There might be a better way to word this

Overall: Decent for a mic