A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWDjKHUx4sg
2m18s I didn’t think/know/intend that as a punch line
4m42s This line isn’t needed after a good laugh
7m01s Say “inflation” a little more upbeat
8m36s Good job being in the moment
9m41s I can turn to an audience member like, “he’s like, is that true? Hmmm”
12m22s Don’t finish the joke or address the comment first
Overall: Decent not great.
“Headlining” a bar show for 4-6 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UKplehbIrRM
0m17s He said “this next comic gave me half my punchlines” which is why I addressed it
4m54s Say “need to” not “needa” and emphasis “need”
7m07s Be a little more smiley during this joke
7m52s Good save line, use it more often
12m38s Try the “that’s crazy right” in the crazy voice
13m58s Slightly longer pause after “I’m kidding”
15m05s Pause longer after “neuro war profiteering”
16m29s The gold line isn’t necessary, use a real save line instead
17m37s This can go to an act out
17m50s Change the voice for the friend a little more
Overall: Considering there were very few people here it went decently enough. This is the longest I’ve done with the split-personality act, so I was pleased I could do 21 minutes without notes
Going last on a comedy and music mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B_240SwGJ_A
0m48s Say “heard” not “saw”
1m12s No need to discuss my thoughts on it
5m43s Add in a “she’s like” before the whispering
6m21s Say the front runner line in the crazy voice
6m47s End the sentence on “was never a fan”
7m18s Do a stronger act out/different voice for the friend’s advice
8m36s I should use that line more often
8m59s Cut the metal rod line and go straight to the birthday
10m21s Instead of “I wouldn’t” just repeat “I wouldn’t date a sociopath”
Overall: Good set but some jokes could’ve gone better.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXYobpiUWOc
3m25s Make a bigger lip licking motion
5m27s Try saying “that’s crazy, right?” in the crazy voice
6m27s Sound a little more distraught about the electric fence
Overall: Decent for a mic.
A 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXYobpiUWOc
0m32s Rephrase to “the voices usually sound like this”
0m42s Try not giving an example right away, let them almost forget about the crazy voice
2m18s Don’t put that much emphasis on “also”
3m15s Go back to the other punch lines I had here
4m06s The voice here isn’t necessary
4m16s The “fall in love” line should be in the crazy voice
5m47s Say “knock knock” in my regular voice then switch it
Overall: Decent, but some of the set order and places where I use which voice need changing
