Performance Critique: February 16a

An open mic


1m26s Try “he can’t help you”

1m48s Instead of “that’s why I’m” say “good thing I’m”

3m07s If I’m gonna laugh it should be for longer and harder and then end more abruptly

4m43s There might be a better way to word this

Overall: Decent for a mic

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