Going last on a music and comedy mic
1m12s Turn my head to one direction or another on the “romantic” line
2m18s Cut the dog eating lines
4m22s Put the emphasis on “mine”
6m30s Add “I guess” before “I should’ve warned”
9m08s It should be “women’s” not “women”
Overall: It took a couple minutes to get the crowd with me, but then it went pretty well.