Performance Critique: February 17b

A late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Olnpy0bNK4o

2m04s Cut the dog eating line

3m58s Weak acting like I’m thinking before saying the “I guess” line

5m12s Reorder the words of these two lines

5m57s It should be “kids” not “children” the second time

6m52s Finish the sentence

7m04s Say “good thing I brought mine” a little more playfully

9m18s Try “I’m also a good person” instead of “and I’m…”

10m01s Finish the sentence even if improvising

10m47s Try “must’ve felt” instead of “felt”

13m02s Say “lucky lady” instead of “lucky audience member”

Overall: A little up and down but good set.

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