Performance Critique: May 13b

A mic with 8 comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_B9rU4ve_I

2m22s If I’m gonna shake my head, I should always shake my head while in the character

4m49s Don’t point for that long, change the motions

5m23s If slow to respond, add “do you know what a website is?”

Overall: Decent for a small mic

Performance Critique: May 13a

A mic with 5 comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Okm5LxyCTcw

1m01s If the mic is in the stand, the motion should be a two handed motion

1m58s Cut “certified sane”

5m14s Cut “probably”

Overall: Not horrible considering there were only four people in the room.

Performance Critique: May 4a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R0LQCTJ5OP4

3m08s Rework the “I have a dream” line

4m15s The apology line should have a punch line in it

4m34s Only one hiccup in the act out, not two

6m54s Tighten the setup

Overall: Standard weak mic response

Performance Critique: May 3

The 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zPJZBMryik

2m42s Cut the coworker part

3m34s Rephrase the shrinks sentence to be smoother

4m42s Add a “because” before “he’s from”

6m06s Hit “normal person” harder

6m47s Keep bouncing around more while in the character

Overall: Eh. At least I’m learning which new tags work and which don’t.

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