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Performance Critique: May 3

The 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zPJZBMryik

2m42s Cut the coworker part

3m34s Rephrase the shrinks sentence to be smoother

4m42s Add a “because” before “he’s from”

6m06s Hit “normal person” harder

6m47s Keep bouncing around more while in the character

Overall: Eh. At least I’m learning which new tags work and which don’t.

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