Late night music and comedy
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=djjL52QknTQ
2m27s Decent response, could’ve been stronger
3m15s Cut the word “kinda”
4m31s Cut “most”
5m19s I love this new line
6m55s Have a bigger smile
8m41s Get the leave joke in after the first two times I say leave
8m57s Make a more distinct gesture towards my face for this
Overall: Solid set. Some newer stuff worked towards the end.
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oAfDQTUxXF4
0m16s An audience member was from Russia so I addressed it right away
1m30s People walking in 30 minutes into the show
3m15s Let the sadness linger for another half second
3m40s No need for “it’s true” ruins the flow
4m03s Don’t point until “neuro”
4m30s Great delivery on this line
4m43s Rephrase this line
5m15s Slow down the line of “no, not a women’s prison”
8m00s Stop dropping my hands on punch lines, keep them up
Overall: Good set, I interwove crowd work with material pretty smoothly, and wasn’t fazed by half the audience walking in during.
A bar show for 15 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lwr5sVpF7go
0m14s Don’t even acknowledge that it missed this early on
1m25s No need for “I know” either skip it or say “I knew it”
3m29s Nice line, look for someone with parents there to get an extra laugh in the future too
5m21s Make “it won’t be” more sing-songy
6m08s At least it’s a strong save line
6m14s Don’t acknowledge the save response
8m20s Try not to over stutter
Overall: Mediocre to average. A few big laughs too many small laughs.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=82Vg8NStYxA
8m42s Dart my eyes around more when in the character
Overall: Good for a check spot.
Headlining a coffee shop show in NJ for 15 or so older people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xJ1uqoyvZQU
9m09s Do the arm wave through motion for longer
10m28s I adjusted the school name I say based on where I was
10m51s After the school sweatshirt/halfway to a diploma, I could’ve added “that’s how I got half my credits”
13m12s Pause another half second after “black”
17m20s I should get off stage here on an applause break
Overall: Very solid 18 minute set in front of an audience I wasn’t sure would like me.
