Performance Critique: July 14a

A bar show


0m16s An audience member was from Russia so I addressed it right away

1m30s People walking in 30 minutes into the show

3m15s Let the sadness linger for another half second

3m40s No need for “it’s true” ruins the flow

4m03s Don’t point until “neuro”

4m30s Great delivery on this line

4m43s Rephrase this line

5m15s Slow down the line of “no, not a women’s prison”

8m00s Stop dropping my hands on punch lines, keep them up

Overall: Good set, I interwove crowd work with material pretty smoothly, and wasn’t fazed by half the audience walking in during.

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