A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oAfDQTUxXF4
0m16s An audience member was from Russia so I addressed it right away
1m30s People walking in 30 minutes into the show
3m15s Let the sadness linger for another half second
3m40s No need for “it’s true” ruins the flow
4m03s Don’t point until “neuro”
4m30s Great delivery on this line
4m43s Rephrase this line
5m15s Slow down the line of “no, not a women’s prison”
8m00s Stop dropping my hands on punch lines, keep them up
Overall: Good set, I interwove crowd work with material pretty smoothly, and wasn’t fazed by half the audience walking in during.
