A bar show for 15 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lwr5sVpF7go
0m14s Don’t even acknowledge that it missed this early on
1m25s No need for “I know” either skip it or say “I knew it”
3m29s Nice line, look for someone with parents there to get an extra laugh in the future too
5m21s Make “it won’t be” more sing-songy
6m08s At least it’s a strong save line
6m14s Don’t acknowledge the save response
8m20s Try not to over stutter
Overall: Mediocre to average. A few big laughs too many small laughs.