Performance Critique: July 13

A bar show for 15 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lwr5sVpF7go

0m14s Don’t even acknowledge that it missed this early on

1m25s No need for “I know” either skip it or say “I knew it”

3m29s Nice line, look for someone with parents there to get an extra laugh in the future too

5m21s Make “it won’t be” more sing-songy

6m08s At least it’s a strong save line

6m14s Don’t acknowledge the save response

8m20s Try not to over stutter

Overall: Mediocre to average. A few big laughs too many small laughs.

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