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Performance Critique: June 14

An 8pm show for a small crowd

httpv://youtu.be/58tR5BXISIU

2m20s Cut the lonely line

2m38s No need to address that it’s a dick joke

3m18s If the shoes gets a good laugh, I can do the act out without labeling it from here on out

3m57s No need for history majors line

4m58s Decent improvised line to keep around about “people laugh at different speeds”

Overall: Ok set, tighten some of the newer jokes

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