An 830pm bar show
httpv://youtu.be/BuAdr46qYhI
0m35s Crowd work to material needs a smoother transition
2m45s If a couple isn’t married, it might be funny to ask “why not?”
Overall: Decent but shouldn’t have closed on that last joke.
Performance Critique: June 28a
A 7pm basement show for like ten people
httpv://youtu.be/pbhP_EoTL9o
2m53s Could’ve focused more on this bit of info from the audience
3m42s Good job being in the moment to acknowledge it
4m31s Smoother delivery here
Overall: Ok not great. Could’ve pushed for more crowd work when I found out about the guy not signing a prenup the second time.
Performance Critique: June 27
A 9pm show
httpv://youtu.be/iC5asluW1DA
5m51s I could cut the words “interesting side note”
Overall: Solid set
Performance Critique: June 26
Going last 2+ hours into a show
httpv://youtu.be/s_QWEqS7iTI
0m40s Have a joke response line for when I learn where they’re from
2m35s Do the wet dream line to a younger audience member before the czar line
8m12s Good job with the crowd work and continuing it for a while after they said something funny
9m40s Open eyes more
Overall: Mediocre material wise, good crowd work wise.
Performance Critique: June 24b
Opening a 4:30pm graduation show
httpv://youtu.be/sJq8AkBxLT8
0m31s At least try a “oh, we used to be neighbors” before going into the bit, or don’t ask the question
1m44s Tighten the commentary about the audience here
6m18s Hit that last line harder
Overall: Strong short set, too many questions of the audience for only 6 minutes though
