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Performance Critique: November 26a

Going up on the 8pm show after someone bailed on their set two minutes in and made the room awkward.

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4GYWiQ0oIko

1m17s Hold the “what the hell look” for an extra half second

1m52s The iPhone joke is no longer one of my stronger jokes

4m45s Scrunch my face first, then crouch down

4m56s Let them complain for longer before going into my rant

5m10s It doesn’t make sense to do both the “that’s how I wrote the joke” and to ask them for money

5m38s Shouldn’t have gone into another mom joke when the response to the first two was only so so

6m33s Don’t bring my arm up until the word “passion”

7m34s Lean back a bit while saying “no, no, no”

9m04s It should be “MY O’Reily Factor appearance” not “THE”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M41LUuI9ddQ

0m13s It should be “SWEAT pants” not “pants”

0m27s The above mistake is why this punchline completely missed

2m19s The better response would’ve been, “you’re my manager, I pay you to know if she’s here”

2m53s This is about when I should’ve grabbed the mic stand

Overall: I brought the room back to normal after it got really awkward but the set itself was average to mediocre.

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