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Performance Critique: November 23

Going last at my Astoria show for an audience of 8

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=04FwjJERZ_w

0m36s The wireless mic kept fading in and out

0m59s Pause after “How”

3m43s Say all these diseases much slower, pausing after each syllable, to prove my point

5m03s Tilt my head to the side and widen my eyes more

5m21s I can say “I don’t have a spreadsheet or something” as a callback to my “cool in a nerdy way” joke (that I didn’t do tonight)

6m39s Act more surprised about the last photo

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=putibvIr4GQ

1m01s I need a better punchline but the idea is there

1m57s Do that in the same voice as the previous impression

Overall: Considering I was sick and went up almost 2 hours into the show, it went okay. The callback ending worked well.

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