This is the 830 show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IEKV0e9ZRBM
0m11s The MC made a joke about himself being fat
0m46s Take a half second pause between “in a relationship” and “Igor”
1m09s Make a face for “Igor loves this” to help the laugh
1m52s I decided to ignore the random yell as I already addressed crowd work and this was at the end of a setup
3m59s No need to say “that was it”
4m12s Eating the audience’s fries is evidence I’m getting more comfortable on stage
4m54s For the Igor likes this call back, try it without the special voice
5m55s I’m not talking in my regular voice, I should sound sadder about this
7m55s If that gets interrupted again, I should say “that means” instead of “therefore”
8m02s Pause between “go to” and “high school”
8m33s Pause for a second after “Igor loves this” to see if it gets a laugh before leaving
Overall: I was getting small laughs throughout and that’s not good enough. My voice was not conversational for a lot of the jokes and that affected the laughter. On the bright side, I enjoyed eating the audience’s fries.
