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Performance Critique: November 27b

This is the midnight show, I’m on around 130 in the morning and I had to set the camera up in the sound booth because there were people sitting all the way in the back

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mmFSemm4KXo

0m12s The MC talked about me dropping out of grad school as my 20 second intro

0m44s I could’ve done the facial expression better

1m26s The “foooood” line needs to go

1m51s Not sure why those two lines didn’t hit

3m45s Interesting one person applause break

4m40s This is the first time I’ve sung on stage, there’s a reason I didn’t start sooner, and it’s the same reason I stopped after half a second

4m57s I’ve been having good improvised responses lately

5m17s Talk way slower about standards dropping for the midnight kiss

5m27s No need for a special voice for “who is that stunning creature in the corner?”

6m03s I’m excited that get some applause

6m23s They started dropping checks

7m28s I thought that was funny

Overall: I think I did a little better than it sounds because of where the camera was positioned. It’s a good and bad sign that 3 of my 4 biggest laughs were on improvised material. It’s good in that I’m getting funnier in the moment but bad that I’m still learning how to make my jokes seem like I just came up with them instead of them being rehearsed.

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