Going last on a comedy and music mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B_240SwGJ_A
0m48s Say “heard” not “saw”
1m12s No need to discuss my thoughts on it
5m43s Add in a “she’s like” before the whispering
6m21s Say the front runner line in the crazy voice
6m47s End the sentence on “was never a fan”
7m18s Do a stronger act out/different voice for the friend’s advice
8m36s I should use that line more often
8m59s Cut the metal rod line and go straight to the birthday
10m21s Instead of “I wouldn’t” just repeat “I wouldn’t date a sociopath”
Overall: Good set but some jokes could’ve gone better.
