“Headlining” a bar show for 4-6 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UKplehbIrRM
0m17s He said “this next comic gave me half my punchlines” which is why I addressed it
4m54s Say “need to” not “needa” and emphasis “need”
7m07s Be a little more smiley during this joke
7m52s Good save line, use it more often
12m38s Try the “that’s crazy right” in the crazy voice
13m58s Slightly longer pause after “I’m kidding”
15m05s Pause longer after “neuro war profiteering”
16m29s The gold line isn’t necessary, use a real save line instead
17m37s This can go to an act out
17m50s Change the voice for the friend a little more
Overall: Considering there were very few people here it went decently enough. This is the longest I’ve done with the split-personality act, so I was pleased I could do 21 minutes without notes
