This is the Sunday open / feedback mic I go to. There were two or three audience members here.
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gIhhK4xBUlo
0m03s I didn’t ask to be introduced with the cute thing at this mic…
0m25s When the MC gave the “he’s cute intro” another comic started to get up, so everyone was laughing at him
0m37s The comic is my friend so I was just teasing
0m52s Wait another second of silence after “or tennis”
1m38s I wrote down a version of this joke when my friend observed it, but I’ve been unable to recreate the humor on stage
2m23s Don’t ask “you probably didn’t cheat on him, right?” Make it a statement
3m15s Bad timing between the words and my actions. The best part of the joke was “because my career is going places” everything else needs serious work
4m02s Make it that I’ve already been protesting, instead of wanting to start
4m36s This reaction is actually is pretty good for an open mic
5m22s This should be said more ranty and fed up
Overall: I tried out some new jokes and most of them worked. After the set, I got a suggestion to add a line about voting for McCain to my rock paper scissor joke so I’ll be trying that out.
