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Performance Critique: March 17th

St. Patrick’s Day is one of the worst days of the year to do comedy. While there was a crowd of 6 to 10 people, almost everyone there was only there because the Irish pubs were too crowded and they wanted to talk and drink. It also didn’t help that I was running on 4 hours of airplane sleep and came straight from the airport to my day job to comedy.

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCpdOOWMCbA

0m22s There are 4 girls with severe ADD in the first row

1m18s While this wasn’t anywhere near my best set, I left happy because the “stand up guy” was the one new joke I wrote that day and it worked really well

2m06s When they respond that their boyfriend is handsome, I should say “good, you probably won’t cheat on him” and then go into the explanation

2m27s Instead of “No one ever says” it should be “no situation ever warrants someone saying” 

2m36s It’s interesting how when the audience is chatty and replies, they tend to have the exact same responses as previous audiences. Since I was previously challenged about strippers needing tits, I was able to respond quickly 

3m05s The girls are just having a long conversation amongst themselves

4m24s The amount of background noise you’re hearing on the videotape is about the same I was hearing on stage. After trying to get people to stop talking, I just started trying to talk over them. This is where a mic comes in handy 

4m46s I missed a good finger snap 

6m06s Seriously, I need a better line than “that’s the girl you gotta marry” 

7m01s I ran out of hard drive space on my video camera, but my set ended unceremoniously shortly thereafter. Lesson learned: make sure you have room on your video equipment before you begin a set

Overall: I’m glad my one new joke worked and I think I did a good job of “plowing” or “powering through”. This is what you sometimes have to do when nobody is really listening, and nothing seems to be working. I didn’t speed up my delivery when this occurred and was able to keep the situation from getting too crazy. Next St Patrick’s Day I will do my best to be drinking my ass off (at a non-stand up venue) and not come anywhere near a stage… 

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