Performance Critique: March 10

An open mic


2m03s Try rephrasing “she’s cute and has five out of five stars”

2m46s Commit to this character more

3m33s Try saying “it’s like…” before “I wanna spend the rest of my life with you”

4m14s I’m trying to go vulnerable after being dark, but I need a better vulnerability joke

4m53s Consider doing an act out of offering plan B at the bar

5m14s It might make sense to add “I’m not making this up”

6m21s Do the batman character stronger

Overall: Decent for an open mic as most of the jokes got some sort of reaction. The twice the toys twice the neglect needs to be fixed up, I think it’s in the delivery.

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