Another weeknight crowd:
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a7v9n_aGkO0
0m29s I think the audience member’s “you should be in porn” comment was sarcastic
1m41s Good job waiting a few seconds so everyone gets the joke
2m36s I can cut out “I wasn’t born in this country” because it’s redundant with “I came to this country when I was four”
3m07s Pause for a second between “get PhD” and “then do what want” as they started laughing
3m25s Get rid of the “help me please” line
3m34s It’s always nice to get applause with a 12 person crowd
3m57s That line didn’t hit because I didn’t make it obvious I was responding to what my mom said
5m36s Admit “that was too far, you’re right” then say something worse
6m02s Don’t do the finger thing, until after “take two” and then do the thing twice
6m22s I think the PEZ characters for morning after pills with alliterated names are hysterical, but it doesn’t seem to be working
Overall: Pretty decent overall, I need to keep tightening the immigrant and the morning after pill jokes
