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Performance Critique: August 2

My last writer’s mic in NYC, I hosted it. (I did a show on Aug 1, but it’s audio only.)

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MzJCpXE_7ao

0m34s Change my voice more for my friend’s reaction

1m28s This is a new variation of my old joke, I tried changing it from the AIDS scenario to the having her mom walk in

1m45s Move around the stage for the different characters

Overall: I didn’t commit to either act out enough to learn whether it’s funny or not. I think the mom walking in could be good, if I really get the characters going.

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