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Performance Critique: January 8a

The 8:30 show, I was the last comedian going up around 10:15

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wFnzQjfW1mM

0m11s Before I got on, the MC mentioned “they’ve been together for two years and no commitment” so I went right into that

1m15s Make the scared face before turning the other way

1m54s Pause for a second before “because”

3m18s Pause for a second and look angry / confused before shaking my hair around

3m40s I wasn’t sure if it was a girl or a guy, so I said “you” instead of “this guy”

4m07s I changed how the accent in “businessman” sounds, it seems to have worked better

5m12s This was delivered fairly well but didn’t get a response. I decided to bail out and not do the act out of talking about shoe types, but I think doing it would’ve helped it make more sense

Overall: This was a solid set. All my old material went over well but of course the one new line I really wanted to try out didn’t hit at all. I think I know why that happened and will work on fixing it.

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