The second open mic of the night
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pDUron7WYNY
0m11s I’m in a coat cause it’s freezing
0m21s Even at an open mic, I’m trying to address the situation in the room before going into material
0m48s There were no girls at this open mic, so I had to play pretend
0m53s It was really loud
1m53s You know a joke is going too far if the comics are shocked by it
3m45s I was more focused on scrolling down and it got a better response, this is the funniest line in the Yelp joke
4m24s Two waitresses walked in loudly, so I addressed it
4m38s A better tag would’ve been, “so if any of you run shows and want me to try stealing the girls you bring there, give me a guest spot”
5m45s I almost never expect an applause break but I was so giddy about this joke while writing it, I could see it in my head
6m06s The Shakespeare one liner is two for two on the day
Overall: This went fairly well for an open mic and fully convinced me I need to significantly tighten my Yelp joke. The Shakespeare joke is ready for a real audience and the suicide joke needs to keep being tinkered.
