Going towards the end of a music mic
httpv://youtu.be/EIOXkDFI3zA
1m53s Try putting more emphasis on “remember”
3m47s No need for a full pause between “team” and “four years”
4m01s Change or cut the “drug test” line
5m47s Could’ve made fun of her going on a first date in a hotel more
6m20s Pause longer after “I liked the last one more”
7m22s Find a better “all the enthusiasm of _” line, perhaps dead puppies?
9m29s I could’ve done my “I guess everyone went to University of Phoenix Online” save line
Overall: Good solid set, just need to change/cut a couple of lines.
