Performance Critique: February 8

Going towards the end of a music mic


1m53s Try putting more emphasis on “remember”

3m47s No need for a full pause between “team” and “four years”

4m01s Change or cut the “drug test” line

5m47s Could’ve made fun of her going on a first date in a hotel more

6m20s Pause longer after “I liked the last one more”

7m22s Find a better “all the enthusiasm of _” line, perhaps dead puppies?

9m29s I could’ve done my “I guess everyone went to University of Phoenix Online” save line

Overall: Good solid set, just need to change/cut a couple of lines.

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