Performance Critique: February 6

Going last 2.5 hours into a show


0m06s No need to repeat “it does”

2m48s Need a better response when they dispute their cycle of sadness

3m05s Cut this line

3m27s Cut the whole phone charger joke when doing a tight set

3m58s Good to interact and go off script

5m07s Say “fail” instead of “end”

5m35s Change “he doesn’t have advanced degree” to “he has no future”

5m57s Say this sentence clearer

Overall: Ok response considering half of the already small crowd had left. Need to cut some stuff in the middle.

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