The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/VeaugxO2KbA
0m08s Say thank you an extra time to increase the odds the guy in the back stops talking, or take a longer pause
0m28s Having someone “shhh” for me is better
4m48s Good idea doing crowd work after that bit, smoother than going straight into material
6m12s Consider cutting or reworking this whole part
7m45s Good job waiting for the crowd
8m55s The cross country flight needs punching up, it’s weaker than the first two parts of this joke
12m07s Try “started charging eighty” instead of “upped my price to eighty”
12m53s Have the hand puppets kiss at the end
16m09s Make the waiter sound even sadder
17m20s I like the ending, would be good to do two one liners instead of one before doing the reveal
Overall: Decent set. Minutes 12-17 had too much sad stuff in a row and I didn’t make enough use of the safe word concept. I also could’ve addressed the talking a little more.
