February 1
Going last at a music mic
httpv://youtu.be/_tpF3vWCVEM
4m15s Need to figure out if I should ask the question again if they answer it instead of saying “why”
4m55s Be a little more smiley/happy after the Blade character
5m50s Change “casket” back to “nursing home”
6m38s Seem more offended
7m35s Enunciate “upped” better
9m21s Air quotes should be on “super tough” not “movie watching”
10m28s The jump into the character is a good idea
10m46s Good job waiting for an extra second on the last line, might want to wait even longer or add “I’ll see you after the show”
Overall: Decent for last at a mic. The way I’m closing this set is definitely worth exploring.