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Performance Critique: August 2

Late night with the few remaining audience members, after the regular show ended

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ru-EfM9Zsc

2m37s Do more poses

3m04s Change “Fabio” to “Jesus”

3m48s Get rid of “your” in the sentence

4m03s Shorten “when did” to “when’d”

5m19s I need a stronger save if this joke doesn’t hit because it is a political joke

Overall: Except for the junkie actor joke I did well, especially considering it was 2.5 hours into the show

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