Headlining a bar show
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5DPA-12h_40
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5DPA-12h_40
0m43s Fix this tag, there’s potential but it’s not fully clear
2m22s Pause for another half second, they might eventually get it
3m09s “Elton” doesn’t work, go back to “Jesus”
3m51s Change “ask me” to “wonder”
4m22s End the response after “I love that Donkey”
4m43s Good line
5m00s Act out the guy
5m50s At least I cut this joke done from 2:30 to 1:00, but it’s still not working
9m25s This joke is clearer weaker than the other jokes
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_hrENo2to8
0m32s Be careful to say the same line of “nobody believes me” and not “no one believes me”
Overall: Lost part of the crowd in the middle when checks came out but I got them back towards the end.
