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Performance Critique: April 11c

This is the last show of the night, the 12am show. I got on right after they paid the bill at around 2am.

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wUW8f-ZI28Q 

0m35s It’s official: opening with “I don’t know if you noticed this, but I am adorable” only works at a bar, not a comedy club 

1m14s I started drinking while waiting to go 

2m10s Two bill jokes is enough, three is too many 

2m27s These girls wound up going out to a bar with me and two other comics after the show 

3m21s I like the technique of taking charge when an audience member doesn’t answer by giving them their answer, just gotta be careful not to overuse it 

4m08s Don’t say “third date” twice 

4m27s The bombing starts…. 

5m10s Is this Dresden during WWII? 

5m28s Not sure why I said that, no more drinking during shows for me 

6m24s Pretty painful two last minutes 

Overall: Like a relief pitcher in baseball, I conveniently forgot how badly I bombed those last two minutes until I re-watched the video… repressed childhood memories coming up next! I don’t mind bombing every once in a while as it keeps me hungry and motivated, plus it’s good to power through the pain every once in a while. It’s clear I lost the crowd at “love at first drink, huh?” The only frustrating thing about this set is I wound up watching most of the show, and I know I would’ve gotten a much better response if I had gone up an hour earlier before everyone came down from their alcohol high and started getting tired (I still should have been able to keep the crowd’s laugher though)

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