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Performance Critique: April 11b

Second show of the night, this is the 10:30

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j-gbo9NjFXU 

0m19s Trying this new opening line a couple times, but it’s not having the results I’d like 

1m53s No need to say “I’m a terrible person” before the joke 

2m47s Not sure if I should’ve forced their answer or tried to coerce something for a little longer 

3m20s I missed doing the finger snap and point for “that’s your first date” 

3m29s This line is repetitive and not needed, but at least I didn’t completely forget about the finger snap and point 

4m40s I do appreciate a funny audience, even if they put me at a loss for words because I’m laughing 

5m14s No reason to explain it 

5m52s I should say “I’ll tell you” before “that’s demasculating” 

6m37s The closing was weaker than I would’ve liked 

Overall: Decent set but nothing special, I’m just getting my reps in and figuring out the order and details of some jokes. The audience member enquiring about the orgy was pretty funny though.

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